Tuesday, March 15, 2011

slope of the hips,
the long draping hair,
and big expressive eyes,

word game right,
jeans real tight,
and shit, she seems pretty kind too,

she can be real scatter-brained though,
she wears a geeky retainer at night,
and gets a tad quiet if she's feelin' self-conscious,

there will be this, but way more of that,
plenty of care and attention,
she got responsibilities to handle too,

but man, she's worth it.

1 comment:

  1. Hi! I know you don't know me, but I'm Paige, a junior at a Michigan high school. For lit class we have to comment on blogs that aren't written by my classmates, so I kept clicking the "next blog" button until I came across a blog I wanted to comment on, and I found yours!

    I really love this poem. Not only can I relate to it in a few ways (the retainer, the scatter brain, the responsibilities, the occasional self-consciousness), but I also love the ending. Us girls ARE worth it. Sometimes I can be grumpy, tired, impatient, snappy, or stressed; sometimes I'm all five. I feel like I tend to take it out on my boyfriend more often then not because he's the one who I'll usually vent to about how stressed I am with school. Sometimes I feel bad for him because I get so grumpy around him, but thankfully, he says "it's ok" and gives me a hug. I don't know how he puts up with me. But like you said, even though us girls can sometimes be a lot to handle, we're definitely worth it.
    Thanks for writing this awesome poem and posting it; I love it :)
    Paige

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